My Holiday Writing

Hi everyone,
I want to share another peace of my writing, but this time it will be about my school holidays! It is about one event that happened.

Here is my writing: 

My School Holidays
By: Mahrosh K


During the school holidays, I went to the city. I went to the city with my family. We went to the city because my dad thought that we needed to drive around and walk.

But first we went to the laundromat to wash and dry our clothes. I had to help my dad carry all of the clothes. I also helped him put the clothes in the dryer.

After we went to the laundromat, we drove to the city. It took about 20 minutes. Once we had reached the city,  my dad parked the car in a car park. So when he had parked it, we got off and wore our jackets. My family and I got out of the car park and started walking uphill. My legs got tired as we walked more and more. My sister Anoosha, wanted some ice cream from Mcdonalds. So my mum started to find a mall. As soon as she found one, we headed over there.


When we got in the mall, my parents started to find a food court. They searched everywhere on the ground floor. But they could not find it. So we had to take an escalator to the first floor. We also looked everywhere on the first floor. But still, we could not find it. All we could see was shops.  So we took another escalator to the second floor. As soon as we reached the second floor, I could smell some food. We started to head to the food court. My family and I looked everywhere to find McDonald’s. But we couldn't find it. We had to go back to the ground floor and exit. Once we got out, my dad found a Mcdonalds across the street.


So my family and I went across the road and went into McDonald’s. We found a table that had four chairs. But on the table, there was some leftover food and drinks. My dad and I put the food and drinks in the bin. So then, my dad went to order the food. He got both me and Anoosha an Ice cream and fries. He also brought my mum a hot chocolate. The food was so good! ¨ Yummy!” Anoosha said. When we were finished, I threw all the rubbish in the bin and we went out of McDonald’s.  We had to walk all the way back to the car park. After about 15 minutes of walking, we reached the car park. My dad unlocked the car, and we all went inside.

I was feeling pretty excited to go for a walk in the city because we had not walked together as a family in so long. My favorite part of the day was when I had my ice cream and fries. They were so delicious! Also, I really liked the walk because I really like to hike.  What a wonderful day I have had!





I hoped you liked my writing!