My Writing

 Hello!

I want to show you my writing I completed today. I started it yesterday, but then I finished it off today. It's called: Waking the Giant. 

Here it is:

The ground shook, the  birds began to panic. Trees were beginning  to fall. At first, there was silence, but, a few moments later, the ground began to shake again. People started to run, birds kept panicking, but there was no use, the rumbling sound kept on going.
A few minutes later, the shaking stopped, and people had locked themselves in their houses. It was just like an earthquake, people hiding underneath tables and their beds. Nobody knew what to do. 

People knew that something woke the creature. The creature had big eyes, a humongous body. A person walked up to their window, and saw that the grass was just like his blanket. So that meant humans had been stepping on his blanket. What if that made him wake up? What if he didn’t want people stepping on the grass? 

The boy told his mum to tell scientists about his idea. He wanted to know if his thinking was correct. The boy was desperate to find out, but he just had to wait. His mum agreed, but she had to find a way to get to the lab without the giant seeing her. 
This was a big rusk, but she knew that she had to do it. She slowly opened the door, and took slow steps, she knew if the giant saw her, it would be a big problem. As soon as she got to the lab, she needed to find a scientist, 

“I have a few questions to ask you,” the mum said. 
“About the giant?” Asked one of the scientists. “Yes about that, so, what made the giant wake up?” The mum replied. “Well, it shows that the giant woke up because it actually needed to eat,” the scientist replied back.
“Wow”, said the mum, “I cannot believe this”. She raced back to her house, but as soon as she got there, the giant was gone. “Oh no! The giant has gone out of sight, what do I do?” she said. She went into her house and explained everything to her son. 

“So I was wrong?” asked the boy. “Yes,” the mum said back. “But where is it?” the boy said. “I don’t know, it’s gone out of everyone’s sight” the mum said. “Oh” the boy said, sadly. A few days passed, and nothing had changed, the giant had gone! Everyone was happy about this, and then everyone returned to their jobs.

So, that's my writing, I hope you liked it!!

My Learning

Kia ora, 

Today I want to show you both my poster and my writing. My poster is about green veggies. Since my class has been into vegetables, my task was to choose a colour, and make a poster about it. 

Here is my Poster: 

My writing is called Waking the Giant. Hope you like it!

Here is my writing:   

Waking The Giant

By: Mahrosh

The ground shook, the  birds began to panic. Trees were beginning  to fall. At first, there was silence, but, a few moments later, the ground began to shake again. People started to run, birds kept panicking, but there was no use, the rumbling sound kept on going.

A few minutes later, the shaking stopped, and people had locked themselves in their houses. It was just like an earthquake, people hiding underneath tables and their beds. Nobody knew what to do. 

People knew that something woke the creature. The creature had big eyes, a humongous body. A person walked up to their window, and saw that the grass was just like his blanket. So that meant humans had been stepping on his blanket. What if that made him wake up? What if he didn’t want people stepping on the grass? 

The boy told his mum to tell scientists about his idea. He wanted to know if his thinking was correct. The boy was desperate to find out, but he just had to wait. His mum agreed, but she had to find a way to get to the lab without the giant seeing her. 

This was a big rusk, but she knew that she had to do it. She slowly opened the door, and took slow steps, she knew if the giant saw her, it would be a big problem. As soon as she got to the lab, she needed to find a scientist, 

“ My son had a few questions I need to ask you” The mum said. 

“About the giant?” Asked one of the scientists. “Yes about that, so, What made the giant wake up?” The mum replied. “Well, it shows that the giant woke up because it actually needed to eat. 

“Wow”, said the mum, “I cannot believe this”. She raced back to her house, but as soon as she got there, the giant was gone. She went into her house and explained everything to her son. 

I hoped you liked my post!